Baylor College Medical School
Assessment Practice Revising & Editing
For each CAPITALIZED sentence, choose the revision that most improves the writing.
Many years ago, our town was the setting for a truly supernatural event (1) THE MOON WAS FULL. IT WAS SHINNING. IT WAS BRIGHT.
1. A. The moon was shining an full and bright.
B. The moon was full and shining and bright.
C. The full moon was shining brightly.
D. Correct as is.