Revising & Editing

1. The following passages of a short story of the CAPITALIZED sections may include the following kinds of errors:

* lack of pronoun-antecedent agreement

* punctuation errors

* correctly written sentences that should be combined

* misplaced modifiers For each CAPITALIZED section, choose the revision that most improves the writing

"You want two rakes?" Ms. Padrone snapped. "Well, you can't have (6) IT! The sign says only one per customer and that's final."

6. A. theirs.

B. this!

C. them!

D. Correct as is