How could this story be better if we didn't have anybody die? (Meaning Willie. Meaning Willie doesn't crash his car and Lisa worried SICK about her husband.)

Question

How could this story be 'better' without Willie crashing and dying?

Asked by b.k r #351202 on 12/20/2013 1:45 PM

Last updated by marlene g #366055 on 4/8/2014 12:50 PM

Answered by jill d #170087 on 12/20/2013 1:55 PM

Willy's wife's name is Linda. You have a great idea there, maybe you should rewrite the ending.

Answered by marlene g #366055 on 4/8/2014 12:50 PM

You have a great idea there, maybe you should rewrite the ending...okay?