The Grapes of Wrath
what hook should i use for my essay if ( if you think your life sucks you should hear about the joads)
would you wanna read my story did it hook u up .........................omg it sucks
would you wanna read my story did it hook u up .........................omg it sucks
This really depends on what kind of essay you are writing. Although your start is catchy, it is too colloquial for an academic expository. If your essay is supposed to be colloquial (laid back, conversational) then you could use it.