“the jungle weeds were crushed down and the moss was lacerated; one patch of weeds was stained crimson.” How does the author’s word choice add suspense in this passage?

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Asked by Sarah L #484626 on 12/4/2015 1:12 AM

Last updated by Aslan on 12/4/2015 1:15 AM

Answered by Aslan on 12/4/2015 1:15 AM

Words like "crush" and "lacerated" have a very menacing and violent feel to them. This intensifies the feeling of danger and suspense.