This was my thematic statement, "Death is just a part of life even if it is the saddest thing people encounter." She said it was too broad
Does your thesis statement directly relate to The Secret Life of Bees?
It needs to
But, I don't know how to
Because this is a short-answer forum, we are unable to help with student essays. None-the-less, if your essay is about death, you will need to choose your topic sentences to support the theme. Different characters in the story have died...... how did their deaths affect the people left behind? Choose your examples and support them with specific details.
