Speaker or Narrator, and Point of View
The first-person speaker describes climbing a mountainous version of his grandfather. Though Waterhouse uses the present tense, the poem recalls a free and adventurous sense of childhood while also evoking the process of growing older and looking back through one's memories.
Form and Meter
The poem is written in free verse
Metaphors and Similes
Metaphors
-The poem is based on the extended metaphor of climbing, which represents growing up as well as the speaker getting to know his grandfather better.
Similes
-"the skin of his finger is smooth and thick / like warm ice" (Lines 9-10): The skin of the grandfather's finger is compared to warm ice, which focuses more on the smooth texture of ice rather than its cold temperature.
Alliteration and Assonance
Alliteration
-"give good purchase" (Line 8): The "g" sound repeats.
-"the skin of his finger is smooth and thick" (Line 9): The "s" sound repeats.
Assonance
-"the screed cheek" (Line 18): The long "e" sound repeats.
Irony
N/A
Genre
Lyric Poetry, Nature Poetry
Setting
The setting is the metaphorical terrain of the grandfather's body.
Tone
Focused, Formal, Loving
Protagonist and Antagonist
The protagonist is the loving bond between the speaker and his grandfather. The antagonist is the possibility of falling.
Major Conflict
The major conflict is the challenge of climbing the grandfather.
Climax
The climax occurs when the speaker reaches the summit (the top of his grandfather's head).
Foreshadowing
N/A
Understatement
N/A
Allusions
N/A
Metonymy and Synecdoche
N/A
Personification
A mountain is personified as the speaker's grandfather.
Hyperbole
The speaker's grandfather is described as being the size of a mountain.
Onomatopoeia
N/A