When I Die I Want Your Hands On My Eyes Literary Elements

When I Die I Want Your Hands On My Eyes Literary Elements

Speaker or Narrator, and Point of View

The poem is likely told from Neruda's first-person point of view.

Form and Meter

Free verse.

Metaphors and Similes

The poem uses a metaphor of a traveler who changes his route if his destination forgets him, which signifies that the speaker's love is contingent upon the beloved's feelings.

Alliteration and Assonance

This is the repetition of vowel sounds in nearby words. In the lines "to continue to walk on the sand we walk on," the repeated "o" sounds in "continue," "to," and "on" provide assonance.

Irony

When the speaker says he would leave if forgotten, which contrasts with the deep love and passion usually expected in love poems.

Genre

Love poem

Setting

The poem is likely set in nature.

Tone

Passionate, sincere, and slightly melancholic.

Protagonist and Antagonist

The speaker (Neruda/lover) is the protagonist and the potential forgetfulness or indifference of the beloved can be seen as an antagonist.

Major Conflict

The major conflict lies in the speaker's fear of being forgotten by his beloved.

Climax

The line "to continue to flourish, full-flowered" is the poem's climax.

Foreshadowing

The speaker discussing how he would react if the listener were to forget him foreshadows how he will act for the rest of the poem.

Understatement

The calmness of the sand is understated throughout the poem.

Allusions

There are allusions to the idea of everlasting love and the yearning for the beloved to continue to live and flourish even after the speaker's death.

Metonymy and Synecdoche

The line "the light and wheat of your beloved hands" is an example of metonymy, with the characteristics of light and wheat representing the beloved's gentleness, warmth, and nourishment.

Personification

"So that everything can learn the reason for my song." Here, "everything" is personified as being capable of learning.

Hyperbole

N/A

Onomatopoeia

N/A

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